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Joined: 04/06/2012
I was thinking of opening this girl over text with: hey party girl, I saw a guy going up the escalator like he's in a captain Morgan commercial.

(we met in the mall)
Sound good?

She said she doesn't party even though she's going to a party tonight. I told her I don't drink lol.
Joined: 04/06/2012
Fuck it I sent it. I guess
Fuck it I sent it. I guess I'll find out if it's playful and accusatory if she responds.
Joined: 01/18/2012
Ah sorry man meant to respond
Ah sorry man meant to respond to this lol.

It's a decent text. Gawd I remember writing a response to this my internet must have fubar'd. Only issue I see with it is the language is a bit formal. Like if you were sending this to a friend you'd say "party girl, just saw captain morgan. He was skipping up the elevator like a fruitcake!"

Yours is basically.. taking the correct components, but not putting them together very smoothly. Understand?

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Joined: 04/06/2012
I'm glad I'm getting closer.
I'm glad I'm getting closer. This is fuckin frustrating for me. This is the missing piece in my game though.

Yeah I think I get what you mean, I'll try that with the other number I got.