First Text Transcript - looking for advice

Hey guys,

New to the forums here. Love to get your guys advice on how I can improve my game. Three of my text transcripts are here for some critquing

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Girl 1

This girl I met for 10-15 minutes outside of a club. Shes 18, I have been texting her for 2-3 weeks trying to seed a meetup. Probably reach out to this girl about once a week to see what she's up to. Mainly trying to burn this number to the ground

This is the first text after a while and just seeing if the number is still responsive

Me: What up crazy. Busted up my hip at (snowboarding place) this weekend
Her: How
Me: Wiped out a few times too many. im a slow learner ;( and like to go fasttttttt
Her: Ohhhh I hurt my butt bad
Me: Lame pumpkin butt. (club) was crazy last night u shudda tried your fake <---- this is a club i frequent, she's 18 yo w/ a fake ID
Her: I went clubbing in (other city)
Me: where do you live?
Her: (Place) remember
Me: Haha oh yeah short term memory loss. ps. are you a real person I never see you in town
Her: No I'm not real I'm a cyborg that you met at hess and I work for the gov. So I only go out occasionally
Me: Ahaha all good I fight the gov too. I'm like will smith in i-robot and you're my mortal enemy ;-) ur goin down
Her: Ye ok we'll see about that. I'm so highly trained and I'm like undestroyable
Me: Crazy girl I'm guna have to hunt you down and take you out for drinks and nachos. Thats the only way to defeat a cyborg
Her: Hahah nope illll still defs have my guard on
Me: Haha same here... Can't trust random cyborgs you meet outside (club). I figure you're a nice one though

..............No response for a bit..............

Me: 4 times and no roll up the prize yet..... Boooooo
Her: Haha I won a coffee on my first try :)
Me: Champo, alright driving home now night love
Her: Ok night

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Girl 2

Similar story, met this 19 yo girl for about 20 mins at the club. I think this is the 2nd time I've reached out to her after a LONG hiatus

Me: (NAMEEEEEEEE)
Her: Yes
Me: Stop chain smoking. Come be social and do drinks this week
Her: I am drinking. tonight but in (other city)
Me: Thurs. Drinks on campus with meh
Me: If you're cool that is -__-
Her: I am cool
Me: Cool, Pick ya up at 8
Her: What no I'm shopping
Me: Same gotta buy lulus for my sister. Drinks afta
Her: I'm drinking now tho!
Me: Where ru. I'm by (place)
Her: I'm at (place)
Me: Oh (place) eh. Don't get kidnapped by 15 black men

3 hrs later at 11pm

Her: I didn't :) its all good

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Girl 3

This girl is hot and super dirty, almost bathroom pulled her at the club. Wanted to bang her that night but had to leave early. She's 27ish and I want to get her to meet me asap. Met her for about 30 minutes that night and sent this series of texts the very next day

Me: Hey girl it's Horse
Me: Drinks with me and (wing) later ;)

4 hours later in the night

Her: Lol
Her: Later eh
Her: I made sure (wing) had a great night haha

10 am next day

Me: Lmao he loved it. You're crazy girl
Me: Sucks I missed you on the way out. We should all meet up for drinks sometime next week
Her: Lol
Me: (Wing) doesnt want to but I told him theres a sexy booty shake dance involved. Maybe he'll change his mind haha
Her: Bahaha that's funny

No response for 12 hours, busy doing shit

Me: (Name). Drinks on Thurs I wanna see you in real life
Her: Lol in real life
Her: I was in real life on Saturday
Me: Yea but you were busy and I didnt get a chance to enjoy you. I think we should fix that

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Thanks so much guys. Open to any and all suggestions

Really hate putting this much time into texting these girls with SMALL chance of stars aligning and us meeting up. Any advice?

Cheers!
Horse