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Could anyone take give me feedback for my POF profile?

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Hey dude the grand canyon pic
Hey dude the grand canyon pic is very hokey and conveys a lack of "fuckworthy" so get rid of it. Id say the same for the outstretched arms pic. The party one is pretty hilarious probably your best one. Ill take a look at your written stuff and give you feedback on that as well. The tacoeateron thing is copied from jeffy I believe. It does nothing for you in itself so Id come up with something cooler.
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The pinky/straw/coke thing is
The pinky/straw/coke thing is funny. Id say the first part after the Im so cool part is a bit weak. I almost see this whole thing as painting a caricature of yourself with super human traits and quirks.
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This is how i break it down, let me know what you think
1/ "Coool Cool Coool Cooool... I'm so cool' likees an NLP technique --> make them think i'm cool. And it's a hook for them to read my profile

2/ "Love working out. My new year resolution is running a half marathon and winning my first kickboxing match.

My greatest aspiration is to be a male stripper - it's a competitive niche!

Beyond finishing up my last year at school doing chemical engineering, I'm always running around finding adventures in the little stuff like strangers puppies and puddles"

--> Give them a lil part of who i am. Even though i gotta admit, the first sentence is kinda weak...

3/"Msg me if you are a laid back, social person. Oh and by the way drinking Coke from the bottle with a straw is classy if you ask me. Hell anything with a straw is classy as long as you do the pinkie thing."

--> I think this is pretty good

Let me know how else i can improve it. Btw, i took off the caption, and add 2 more pic that i took with my phone.. check out my okc profile also if you can... I got more result from it.. not sure why...

Thanks for reviewing it...

Erik,
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Take off the 2 pics I
Take off the 2 pics I mentioned. Why did youa dd two landscape pics that makes no sense.

Did you download the app and upload some convos?
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